Resources for Sentence Errors: Comma Splices, Run-ons, and Fragments
Rules for Comma Splices
A comma splice is the unjustifiable use of only a comma to combine two separate sentences. (One should use either a period, a semicolon, or a coordinating conjunction and a comma to separate the two statements.)
Comma splice: Wearing a seatbelt is not just a good idea, it's the law.
Revision: Wearing a seatbelt is not just a good idea; it's the law.
Both run-on sentences and comma splices may be corrected in any of the following ways:
Run-on: Tevon won the award he had the highest score.
Comma splice: Tevon won the award, he had the highest score.
1. Separate the sentences with a period.
Example: Tevon won the award. He had the highest score.
2. Separate the sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
Example: Tevon won the award, for he had the highest score.
3. Separate the sentences with a semicolon.
Example: Tevon won the award; he had the highest score.
NOTE: If a conjunctive adverb like therefore, however, then, or consequently separates the two sentences, use a semicolon also.
Example: I was unwilling to testify; however, I did it anyway.
4. Separate the sentences with a subordinating conjunction such as although, because, since, or if.
Example: Tevon won the award because he had the highest score.
Rules for Run-ons
A run-on or fused sentence is two independent clauses that are not separated by any punctuation.
Run-on: Wearing a seatbelt is not just a good idea it's the law.
Revision: Wearing a seatbelt is not just a good idea; it's the law.
NOTE: Even if one or both of the fused sentences contain internal punctuation, the sentence is still a run-on.
Rules for Sentence Fragments
A fragment is an incomplete construction which may or may not have a subject and a verb. Specifically, a fragment is a group of words pretending to be a sentence.
Fragment: Traffic was stalled for ten miles on the freeway. Because repairs were being made on potholes.
Revision: Traffic was stalled for ten miles on the freeway because repairs were being made on potholes.
Fragment: It was an excellent movie; one that was nominated for an Oscar.
Fragment: It was an excellent movie. One that was nominated for an Oscar.
Revision: It was an excellent movie, one that was nominated for an Oscar.
Fragment: Prospectors invaded the newly discovered territory. Some in wagons, some on horseback, and a few in heavily laden canoes.
Fragment: Prospectors invaded the newly discovered territory; some in wagons, some on horseback, and a few in heavily laden canoes.
Revision: Prospectors invaded the newly discovered territory, some in wagons, some on horseback, and a few in heavily laden canoes.